I will also say demon girl and elf ice princess didn’t really need to be lovers at all. ![]() As she grows upon this actual “Adventure” that she really wasn’t expecting to be on. She could take time to think on that, and either admit she doesn’t know to give him a hand up to help her come up with overall more viable solutions in the long run = thus impressing her, or he could nudge her to improve and she’ll spark to it over time. She could have her own points of views about flawed tactics, and better practices from the legal/war based stand points and she wouldn’t necessarily need to be wrong – BUT the goblin could still challenge her to ask well how would you do better. I do think you could have gotten into the actual politics of the Elven war, as a means to provide two schools of thoughts where the Goblin would over time, soften the elf princess’ harder edge and spoiled nature by presenting a commoner’s point of view about the harsh realities she wasn’t going to face as a royal born. The story is to a point, barely there to start. (I did reach that end, and I’m not sure it was made clear that they all were either legally married, or felt that way at heart) The endings do feel a bit rushed there really doesn’t need to be Anal in a goblin based game where most of them ARE about gaining a harem/breeding one and or keeping it. All of them should have ended up married and pregnant. The witch character really should have also been able to join the Harem and frankly so should Main Girl’s prudish little sister. You introduced a slut mother character who while married/separated is actively fucking the blacksmith (and should properly have been in a Harem style game, a potential LI alongside her daughter) The ginger minge magic character is barely in it all that much – though I give points for at least making her a bit more interesting when she appears at all/more open minded. Most of the back half of the story makes us think we’re going to lose the elf and the demon girls. ![]() However, most of the choices involve 1 girl. Decent attempt for a first try – if it’s a one man team I’d understand a bit more.
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